I dreamed we saw the
naked moon and were struck blind
for our impudence
–Sarah Torribio
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4 responses to “Why yes, I do haiku: ‘The Judgement’”
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Nicely written, Sarah. Loved reading it!
By the way, I write poems and scribble about life’s quiet truths. Do check out my blog and subscribe if you like it.
Keep writing!
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Epic picture choice and I love how, in true haiku fashion, you vividly conveyed the essence of the imposing judgement of the naked moon upon impudent on-lookers, in just 3 lines 💯👌If i were to judge this, it will be a solid 10/10 — you make it look fun, you make it look easy ✍️😸🫡
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